Saturday, August 6, 2005

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missed train
sight of a deceased
he throws the new ring away
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john tiong chunghoo
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* Sunprincess * 30 April 2014

............enjoyed reading each of these....so creative...

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Love the last three haiku's! Great job!

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Poetry Hound 06 August 2005

Yes, I agree with Sherrie that this poem and much of your writing is 'koan-esque, ' poignancy in just a few words. The last stanza is very good.

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john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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