Friday, October 27, 2017

Haiku (From A Season For Everyone - Haiku & Tanka) Comments

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change of season—
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Fabrizio Frosini
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Mahtab Bangalee 16 September 2020

The stoppage nowhere Time is marathon runner Timeout love seeks Iust Raining of the outside heart Never can quench its thirsty

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Navod Dilhara 06 February 2020

Three lines explain a lot.Great haiku.

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Unwritten Soul 11 January 2020

Bitterness somehow make us appreciate sweetness more, Seasons may changed, but it never make soil less loyal to stay, to experience Feelings may changed, but hearts still have room as it never blocked emotions to stay.

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Fabrizio Frosini 21 January 2020

right, dear Soul. Yet, this 'traditional' haiku wants to grasp the passage of the season and provide a parallel with human life (an aspect of life, at the very least) . Sadness is present, but it is felt as a component of the cycle of life (centered on the acceptance of transience - impermanence) .

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Michael Walker 18 April 2018

It is autumn in New Zealand now, somehow an appropriate time to end a love affair. Terrific photo.

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 April 2018

:) yes, the pic is really terrific. I've used it for the ebook - unfortunately I've found an image as good as this one for the paperback cover. Thank you

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Henry Tong 30 January 2018

I guess you have developed a good understanding of Japanese poetry, which bases poet's emotions on nature and focus on mono-no-aware, the suppressed melancholy. I like this lucid, concise haiku very much!

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Fabrizio Frosini 30 January 2018

Thanks, Henry. Indeed I love Japanese traditional haiku (and the best gendai, also)

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Minnie Froh 15 November 2017

i wanted to give your haiku 10, but it is impossible to vote (

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 November 2017

I've chosen a 'no rating' situation, 'cause there are people who like to joke with the 'rating function'. Sorry.

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Minnie Froh 15 November 2017

really, this is an outstanding haiku

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Fabrizio Frosini 24 November 2017

you're one of my best readers, dear Minnie! thank you

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Artep Ofpoetry 09 November 2017

it is sooo .beutifull! .

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Fabrizio Frosini 10 November 2017

............... thanks! :)

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Nudershada Cabanes 27 October 2017

Love also change just like the season.

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Fabrizio Frosini 27 October 2017

Hi Nudershada! a pleasure to see you. in November, your poem will be in the new Anthology ;)

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