It has been five years
And the loss of you I bear
For another year
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Loss of loved one is always painful and the void no one can fill. Have heart they did their share well and are now resting.
A wonderful and heart rending tribute so succinctly and brilliantly presented.
Three striking lines that touch the core of heart. Sometimes brevity delivers the greatest impact.
Great remememberance! A worthy daughter of a wothy Dad.
A heartfelt poem for your beloved father. Beautiful LeeAnn......Top stars
A very heart touching haiku for your beloved father. Brillint words! 5 Stars full on Top for this admirable Tribute
I cite your loveliest two lines: And the loss of you I bear for another year. So brilliantly worded! Amazing haiku!
5 Stars full for this excellent haiku for your father, dear LeeAnn, so sweetest!
This is really excellent....thanks for sharing...