Haiku For Five Loaves And Two Fish Comments

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The key term is love. What could mkve a boy to give his own provisions to feed others? Was it faith in the Messiah? Or was it crowd pressure? Or the emotion called love to give of yourself, what you have, with no expectations?

I never thought this intricate concept. This is really meaningful.

Five loaves and two fishes, remind me of Jesus then still on earth serving food for 5000 people. This amazing short verse, opens a door to the serving life of Jesus when still upon this earth. This short poem intrigues me, Kostas. True excellent short verse. Thank you so much for sharing

'By love'---reveals a great understanding of Christ Jesus and His mission on Earth

a wonderful haiku! Bravo! Please read and comment on my latest I have three

then after all were fed could eat no more, they filled many baskets with fish bread left overs, for always the fed grow hungry away on the long journey home

YEs it is love and pure love which creates wonders for the poor in this world. tony

Where was Jesus during the famine in.... (fill in the blank appropriately) ? Maybe the 'gathered' had to be Jewish? He WAS a Jew, right? Haiku: " there is a common structure that *most* haiku poems follow. It is the 5-7-5 structure, where: The entire poem consists of just three lines, with 17 syllables in total." This 'haiku' must be a Greek variety! But i like the poem. A bit LONG, but stiLLLLL not bad. bri ;)

A wonderful haiku, filled with power and beauty.

Beautifully written. anjandev roy.

Profound piece. Liked it

Spiritually beautiful. The messge resounds throughout the world. Excellent write! : -) My reply is not working.

Spiritually beautiful. The message resounds throughout the world. Excellent write! : -)

Αγαπημενο μου θαυμα.......είναι! !

A great Haiku dear friend! My pleasure reading it again and again!

It is love, above all and then everything get in harmony their New dimension As the miracle of love in your Haiku

My school experiences as a kid in elementary school were very much positive ones. I can thank my teachers and fellow students for that. Years later, one of my English teachers attended a poetry reading I gave in my hometown. I had written my first poem for her English class many, many years before. She remembered the poem.

I remember reading about this in the Bible when I attended a Catholic school as a child. The school, its teachings, are the foundation for who I am today though life is always a struggle with nemesis.

Brilliant poem. Nicely conceived and written.