Haiku. First Touch (5-7-5) Comments

How nature adds beauty and joy to this painful life, everyone knows it but everyone cannot describe it like Valsa. It's only Valsa who is capable of making a thing of beauty even more beautiful than what actually it is, It's a proof that she is born for poetry.

A scene of youths to respect.

Fusion of words blending to form a dance of chaste love – with just 3 lines. wonderful

That is a beautiful haiku with a wonderfully complementing image. (10)

Wow, so nicely written and picture adds flavour to your haiku............10+++

What an intellectual metaphor. Great thought.10+

Beautiful picture in words.

Bewitching experience that can not be described. Excellent haiku. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.

Bowing down in shyness is very wonderful expression of first touch here. Love is expressed in fantastic way to elaborate inner idea.10

A befitting picture post expressing the deep sensuous emotion as very rightly told in those few words.

This is an artistic portrayal of the emotional state of a damsel's first encounter with her youful sensuousness. Thanks for sharing the poem, Valsa ji.

the men also a bit shy thanks Valsa-10

Lovely use of metaphor, Valsa