Haiku. Fire (5-7-5) Comments

This poem tells us why some of the best poems are short, Their brevity pithily tells us so much that a long poem fails to at times. A Haiku that hikes up your mood.

A wonderful little poem dear madam! I liked it so much! Thanks for sharing...10

A thoughtful haiku that stokes the fire inside.

A wonderful haiku, Valsa! Hopefully nothing can put out the burning fire inside

A smouldering volcano inside........superb

Deeply envisioned. A best Haiku nicely presented.....10

ohh superb..and so true. We have to be our own FEA to douse the flame

Fire inside may be positive or negative. It is difficult to determine what to do about it.

Fire fighter's fire is a fire desired. Poem provokes thoughts. Enjoyed. All the way to 10.

Fire fighter's fire is a fire desired. Poem provokes thoughts. Enjoyed. All he way to 10.

A philosophical touch in your haiku........I liked it..........10+