Haiku- Eels (5-7-5) Comments

Best haiku with humour. Enjoyed the eels. Thanks for sharing.

good thing Wes was available! ! ! to MyPoemList. anything with food! did you ever try eating a whole, slippery, live eel? or dead? ya gotta wind the spaghetti on your fork. always glad to help. bri :)

OOps I just sent a note on haiku construction and you now have it down pat excellent Isn't it a joy to do it and do it correctly?

Wonderful description creates such a vivid picture, great Haiku!

I agree with Sanjukta Nag, no more comments.........................

Oh what a wonderful use of simile! loved it! 10+

Yakee..... cant take it more, for sight or mind. Did'nt finish it though.(haiku not the eel) Wait. let me go back and finish the last two lines. don't want to imagine it. That means this Haiku really got me!

Try chopsticks! Great haiku Valsa, Thanks