Haiku ~ Easter Lilies Comments

First of all, a happy day to you and your family Secondly, thanks for reading my poem and making a very warm comment and of course, you have such wonderful haiku so nice to read and reflect upon. best wishes, melvin

Like so much of what you give out Mary, it is beautiful and it shines Love duncan X

haiku by definition are short songs your attempt qualifies as a short song not a very short song as some say count the syllables = 4 / 6 / 5 good enough for an american haiku

A very short, but well written Haiku, Thank you for letting me read, Mary