Sunday, November 11, 2018

Haiku- Drifting Away Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Mihaela Pirjol 13 November 2018

Three elements: desert, water, and air. This is a haiku of hope: that boat sails the waters of life with a clearer vision. As always, your haiku is a proper haiku!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2018

paper boat in the river......I feel here is the essence of the poem. Beautifully penned. Thanks.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 November 2018

Such a magnificent haiku...................

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M. Asim Nehal

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