Thursday, October 17, 2013

Haiku...Devil’s Disciple...Greed Comments

Rating: 5.0

Greed eats the soul, wastes
Life, naked, penniless that’s
Heavens entrance fee
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Ken e Hall
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Noreen Carden 11 November 2013

Hello Ken wow this poem is fantastic you have a gift for writing haiku well done a short message with so much truth

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Lyn Paul 26 October 2013

So well put in so few words. Thank you. oh..... by the way your poet page says you are 98 but you do not look a day over 21?

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Heaven and Hell together make Our lives here a tight rope walk Even if fear of the Devils open gate Or in anticipation of St Peter's talk (fantastic work sir - and welcome to my page too)

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Danny Draper 18 October 2013

A powerful succint piece. Avarice will never suffice or sate the gormless.

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Ken e Hall

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