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Straight to heaven with rosary and desires.....powerful haiku
Yes, rosary beads would be good to take to heaven. I pray the rosary most days, even though it can seem mechanical and repetitive at times. Many of my prayers for Mary's intercession have not been answered, but a few have. A stunning religious haiku, I find.
Thanks for appreciating and for sharing your experience in this context.
We believe that by counting the rosary mechanically, all our pleas to grant our desires will be lifted to Heaven directly! It is a foolish thought....! We have to pray to have the grace to accept all God allows us in our life without complaint and to have His will! Also our prayer should be one of thankfulness for all that we have received from Him. Know God is not to satisfy all our earthly desires! I hope this is what you really meant! Powerful haiku!
This is essentially an analytical study revealing the picture of hypocrisy related to specious religious practices painted by the words of this small poem. You have nicely brought to fore the reality. We must have faith and gratitude and not only desires in our hearts while offering our prayers to God. THank you so much, Valsa Mdm.
This is very heavenly and i feel very blissful with this wonderful composition........Rajnishji.........full credit
I am deeply touched by your valuable comments. Thanks, Deepak ji,
Rosary, desires, beads, prayer. heaven, God...... very fine poem. it elevates the heart. dear poet. unfortunately your poems are all in hindi..... and i cannot understand it..... or else i would have read all ur poems. please write more poems in english........... the whole world will read........ thank you dear poet. tony
Thanks that you have visited my page and read this poem. Its very encouraging indeed. I would like to come up with new poems in English in due course of time. Thanks a lot, Sir.
Praying to God for the wishes to be fulfilled is good...going to the heaven straight with our desires...yes we need rosary beads to strengthen the process..short and cute haiku-10
Thank you, Edward. Our prayers are alright but it is not easy to get rid of our desires till the very end. If allowed, we might carry a load full of desires to the other world.
I agree with Mahakul Ji, it's a fantastic poem................
This is very fantastic composition. With all desires going to heaven is definitely amazing. Faith is definite with ultimate path...10
Thanks for visiting the poem and for appreciating the same through very kind words.
Praying always! With faith and hope. Thanks for sharing.
Superb......And often we see someone with these beads counting something, watching something else and listening to something....Yet desire remains......10+++
You have made an objective assessment of what we generally do in the garb of a prayer. Thanks a lot, Asim ji.
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Insightful and meaningful.......top stars