Monday, January 21, 2019

Haiku - Darkness Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Michael Jack 16 July 2020

Excellent milky cloud floating leaves gossiping in windchimes caught in the current

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Unwritten Soul 22 January 2019

It carries the past in black, the future is frozen but slowly it melting to present...i think it still reflective to let us see the things...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 January 2019

if you can face darkness light will AUTOMATICALLY appear as one crosses a long tunnel DOWN TOWN IN AMERICAS continue to compose HAIKUS POET DEAR U R Wonderful Now I also have started reading Haikus urs AND PG'S

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 21 January 2019

Darkness, a nice haiku.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2019

Night hours! ! ! Darkness! With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Prabir Gayen 21 January 2019

Very fine haiku...nameless ashes....

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Suzon Albert 21 January 2019

Nameless ashes is something to ponder on, a great philosophy of life in your haiku.

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