Friday, May 20, 2022

Haiku ~ Dancing Daffodils Comments

Rating: 5.0

dancing daffodils ~
in the bright afternoon sky
a glittering bloom
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M. Asim Nehal
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Richard Wlodarski 22 May 2022

Your imagery brings about a sense of great freedom!

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M. Asim Nehal 22 May 2022

Thank u so much Richard, I appreciate your comment.

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Indira Renganathan 22 May 2022

Only a poet who has a heart to admire nature can write such poems...you have done it Asim....full marks

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M. Asim Nehal 22 May 2022

Thanks Much Indira ji, I write what I see around me, I am happy you liked it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 May 2022

A delightful little poem......top score!

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Maria Mitea 22 May 2022

Hi Haiku Master! : ) What a delight to read and pick up this small "blooms" : ) . Blessings!

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M. Asim Nehal 22 May 2022

Thanks much Maria, Good to see you back. I am learning this art, I always appreciate your comments.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 May 2022

Tremendously enjoyed The Dancing Daffodils, indeed it is now time to see them dancing, theres is sun but the days are also filled with much breeze and so we see them dancing. Cutest view! 5 Stars

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M. Asim Nehal 22 May 2022

Thanks much Madam Sylvia. You are so kind as ever. I am happy you liked my humble effort.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 May 2022

yet again i render speechless Bravo!

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M. Asim Nehal 22 May 2022

Thanks much LeeAnn, I appreciate your comment.

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Sandra Feldman 22 May 2022

Poet florist has spoken, a beautiful bloom. nchantingly, done.

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M. Asim Nehal 22 May 2022

Thanks much Sandra, I am happy u liked it.

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Dancing daffodils in the bright afternoon sun dazzle like the golden flowers- stunning! .....10.....

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dancing daffodils ~ in the bright afternoon sky

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Michael Jack 20 May 2022

Yes they look like a glittering bloom. Thanks for sharing

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