Haiku. Cut Pomgranate Comments

** Ripped belly ** Amazing phrase and wonderful analogy

A rare and excellent poetic description, and if the pomegranate was not mentioned in the title, it would not be easy for readers to know the purpose of the content.. Excellent our expert poet 10/10

What an apt way of putting it, a lovely haiku on poms.

A wonderful Haiku dear madam......loved reading this cute little work in its brevity..........................10

Beauty, supplemented by a tasty flavor, like a beautiful woman with love in her heart. A sweet and lovely haiku.

Pomegranate is a medicated, delicious and succulant fruit in which it's demand is more. When it is ripped the juicy ruby coloured seeds in its belly look like ruby marbles are strewn on the floor.Dear madam you have painted this poem so nicely and touchingly. Thanks.

Ripped belly! With the act of life. Thanks for sharing.

i hope you have a dog. arf! to eat the 'marbles' that is. bri :)

Beautiful three liner................................

Juicy rubies indeed. So delicious.

Taste buds stimulated with a succulent cut pomegranate with words to savour and relish!

Good one! Yes, pomegranate Is nature's cute treasure trove Of sparkling rubies

Mouth wetting for the sweet juicy berries inside, just like your poems. Thanks for sharing.