Wednesday, October 18, 2006

(haiku) - Confession Comments

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here priests in boxes
lay hands on wicked children
soaking up the sins
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Sonny Rainshine 13 November 2007

I like this haiku a lot. Powerful image of the priests' hands acting as a kind of wick (pun on wicked) syphoning up the children's misdeeds. Good work. As I'm sure you know, haikus are one of the hardest forms to write-not much room to get it right. Cheers.

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royness ( ' ' )

essex, england / carmathen, wales
royness ( ' ' )
royness ( ' ' )
essex, england / carmathen, wales
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