Sunday, May 3, 2015

Haiku - Completely Inert Comments

Rating: 5.0

When my love is lacerated
The blow had congealed me and shut
Making me a clone, completely inert.
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 29 June 2015

Both profound and devastatingly sad. Through these few words you have expressed your grief in a unique way. Great Haiku, Amitava! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 May 2015

Wonderful Haiku. Beautiful pic you have uploaded. Loved reading it.

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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