Monday, June 5, 2023

Haiku - Cold Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

frozen flakes of ice
glisten in her sparkling eyes
melting my cold heart
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Poetic Sky
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Wow! Nice

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 June 2023

Amazing haiku. Strong images that depict a cold heart can also be vulnerable for love. Top Marks!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 05 June 2023

Excellent haiku Poetic

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Anjandev Roy 05 June 2023

Lovely write.......like it....

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David Wood 05 June 2023

Good ink, excellent Haiku.

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 June 2023

Awesome ink. Loved it. Thanks.

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Pallab Chaudhury 05 June 2023

Beautiful and well penned one.... Congrats!

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