Sunday, October 17, 2021

Haiku ~ Change Comments

Rating: 5.0

wonderous blue sky
never allows the settling
neither moon nor sun
...
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M. Asim Nehal
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Shabani H 19 October 2021

I liked your topic and its contents. Change is inevitable.

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Mamta S 18 October 2021

Articulate poem.

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S H 17 October 2021

Just superb poetry, Terse and telling.

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Tihama Hykam 17 October 2021

Sky- never allows the settling, Never thought this way abt sky.;

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 October 2021

I agree

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Michael Jack 17 October 2021

True. wonderous blue sky never allows the settling neither moon nor sun...

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Suzon Albert 17 October 2021

Fabulous haiku. Change is constant without break and what can be better example than this.

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Suzon Albert 17 October 2021

Changing scenes in sky nicely capture.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 October 2021

Only my poetic soul rhapsodically envisages the wonderous blue sky that you have painted in this short majestic poem....top score.

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