Haiku By The Dozen Comments
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Back from dream, still in trance
Fire fights blazing in back streets
Making heart's fierce beats
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A lovely string of haiku. I used to write haiku in this form to make a story. Wonderful.10
Thank you for the comment, Nudershada. Haiku seems too tiny a form to hold what we hope to convey.Very attractive, though.
Oh and was it intentional to add an extra syllable to the first section? :)
No no, not intentional but out of clumsiness. Thank you for pointing it out.
Hey, this is kind of a synchronicty because I've never seen this form before except in my own writing, which I uploaded last year and reuploaded yesterday called 'The Prince's Dream', and in other one's, I was wondering if you had seen it before writing? Considering you said this was made in 2011, I guess not! In any case, great write, really enjoyable - Check out mine to see if ya think there's any correspondence!
Hi, Leon.It's a pleasure to discussion poetry with friends. I began to read and write haiku (5-7-5) in 2011 in my blog and these are just practice. A lot room for improvement. Thanks for the invitation and surely i should read yours...Going there.
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7/18/2025 6:04:10 AM # 1.0.0
Beautifully penned! I find a unique pattern of a dozen haiku placed together! Liked Haiku II most!
Thank you for the visit, Dillip. Glad that you like it.