Sunday, June 7, 2009

Haiku........Body Beautiful Comments

Rating: 5.0

Female fires of wrath

Burning desires of body trim
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Ken e Hall
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Malaya Roses 17 April 2011

Well-shaped haiku and it's the real fire in women... trim & slim... but there is no short cut...! ! I like the way poet expressing his opinion! !

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

indeed.. a bullring red hot three lines indeed! ! ! ! thanks for this one! ! ! 10+++ regards shan

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2009

good excercise on haiku slim, Ken...hot...thanks...10

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a beautiful hot poem..excellent writing..10++++

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Anjali Sinha 11 June 2009

nice ill take a note from there about body fitness -10 anjali

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Marieta Maglas 07 June 2009

''Burning desires of body'' good haiku..well written..10++

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a senryu on fitness...great

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Ken e Hall

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