Haiku (Birds Singing...) Comments

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dude you're dog water

This gave me the best work ever it really helped thanks a lot matey

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great craftsman the Jack Kerouac

I'm sorry, Jack Kerouac. I love you, but your Haiku is a fail. Line 1-presents a problem. Line 2- solves it. Line 3- shows thankfulness.

Leaves are crispy brown. If only sweet rain would fall Leaves would smile again

This is not a correctly written Haiku. Line 1-pose a grievance or issue. Line 3- thankfulness. Line 2- connects both and 3. Line 1 and 3-five syllables. Line 2- seven syllables.

Lovely one...............................10

The sun is a ball It shines in the sky so bright It is a fires flame

Life is filled with work But it also needs some fun Make some time for that

violet greenfield knows she is supposed to be a super-confident

Friendship is a good thing and topic

A mourning dove Lights in the oak tree Calling another night

Birds singing call me From the dark of crude forest Twit and Twittering

That’s beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I dont get it

Up under her Wondering hearth, haughty feet Decision, me for her

HAIKU: Enjoy This Moment / For This Will All Be Over / Before You Can Blink.

I hear it sprinkling Outside for me, I see it Sprinkling there for me