Monday, October 10, 2022

Haiku: Being Surrounded Comments

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Being surrounded
By flowers in bloom; a sad
And silent poet!
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Kiki Materi 10 October 2022

I am not an expert however I think that L3 would be better in that way: And silent poets, very nice image.

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Pallab Chaudhury 11 October 2022

Thank you for reading the poem and the comment being forwarded. With best wishes.

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