Sunday, November 27, 2022

Haiku: Beach Walk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sandals- in my hand;
How thrilling- sea waves scouring
Sand below the feet!
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Pallab Chaudhury
sea
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 November 2022

sand below the feet, cooling, while you watch the sea. Happy to see three haiku with brilliant messages. All to my favovourites with full votes. Thank you Pallab.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 27 November 2022

this haiku takes me to watching the calm sea BravoQ

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David Wood 27 November 2022

don't tread on a weaver fish, their sting really hurts.

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