Haiku. Autumn Sky (5-7-5) Comments

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. A beautiful haiku on Autumn has been portrayed astutely.

In terms of my youth's activities and scenes.To love.

It makes me think of warmth and colours...Nicely written!

How a tiny Haiku can paint a characteristic picture of a season like autumn / winters, is evident here in this poem. Thanks.

Beautiful haiku. Autumn is preparing us for winter. Beautifully presented. Loved it.

Lovely image you’ve painted it made me smile.

Love it. Autumn is having a lovely start here.

This is a poem about movement in nature - that is, from one season to another, and the poem is wise because it knows we cannot stop this movement - but we can prepare for what's to come, thus, the blanket-making. Living in Minnesota, where the four seasons are in such stark contrast, I have often made the distinction between AUTUMN AS LATE SUMMER and AUTUMN AS EARLY WINTER. Your poem focuses on the second. I hope our autumn in 2014 stays as long as possible - autumn as late summer!

Small, nice and true, thick wooly clouds of autumn reminds us of thick wooly blankets of coming winter :)

Beautiful clouds fluffy and delightful. Nice haiku. Thank you.

Wonderful haiku indeed....Valsa....a great imagery with lots of insights crafted brilliantly.......

ooooh! i really want to wrap the woollen rug and cradle in the arms of autumn wind that may take me in a swish to some magical land like the flying carpet of alladin......so dreamy

this's an excellent haiku Valsa, very pretty.

The autumn sky of an ideal strip of land is perceived here. But I am afraid the winter rugs of the sky may be very faint in many parts of India.

Lot to imagine here. Great haiku. I too just posted Autumn (Acrostic) .

nice image with heaps of fluffy wool set to make winter rugs i like the thought