Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Haiku Autumn Leaves Syllable Count 5-7-5 Comments

Rating: 5.0

The leaves of Autumn

lovely gold and brown colors
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Heather Burns
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Nezar edhah 15 March 2019

i love the poem it is super awesome

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Patricia Grantham 17 November 2014

A short but sweet poem showing an Autumn painting. Nice.

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Saheb Mohapatra 05 November 2014

this is also an outstanding haiku...........colors of autumn painting the earth..........greatly enjoyed it..........thanks.

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Brian Jani 13 July 2014

autumn is a time to remember indeed with it's vivid colours and fresh scents

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* Sunprincess * 24 June 2014

...............and I can't wait to see those beautiful colours again.....loved this one...

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Holly Grace 31 March 2014

*The lovely colorful language that you used in this haiku paints a beautiful picture in my mind.* Wonderful job! :)

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Karthika Mukundh 24 September 2013

I love this one... Natures palette has it surprises...

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Shahzia Batool 21 August 2013

what a magic this 5-7-5 syllable division is...i am a conformist too, though it's the time of free-for-all kinds of structures...i still find myself strict for the rules... the poem is as charming as an autumn painting is! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 20 August 2013

Lovely,3 little lines, and yet such a beautifully painted picture. Nature, the great Artist painting the landscape

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Sallam Yassin 20 August 2013

and that is the blanket dear nature sowed for the earth/ nice haiku

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