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Wonderfully composed: the juxtaposition from the second to the third line is great! The transition from Autumn to Winter.
ur still in autumn here its cold winter snow all over many poets who read me r very young 19 plus minus many 43 plus minus I am antique archaic I love to help them some r like kids many like gcs and the best part is they message me and say they love me what more a blessing can there be at age nearing 80 MAN JI
Autumn is beautifully captured....in this lovely haiku! As autumn blasts sweep, the leaves dance and fall and the trees undress and make themselves bare!
Season is my favourite. I enjoyed reading