Wednesday, August 20, 2008

(haiku And Tankas) .... Sleeping Comments

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My lover's warm breath:
quiet air brushes past my cheek
as rustling grass blows.
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Janice Windle
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Chitralekha Chetia 26 August 2008

...Yes, the morning just rests on his shoulders, like I do, many a times, we ignore each other.: -)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 August 2008

....well written......thanks

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Joseph Poewhit 20 August 2008

I pictured a statue reading the poem

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Donall Dempsey 20 August 2008

Ah that peaceful easy feeling...love at rest after all that play. You've worn me out yet my love is endless. Stilled now at your shoulder yet still dreaming of caressing you all over...the calm before the storm. See...the dawn...rising. Rising! love Donall Donall

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