Saturday, September 26, 2015

Haiku And Senryu - 25 (A Busy Day) Comments

Rating: 4.1

sun jogs at the sunrise
spreading out its arms copious,
nature awake.
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M. Asim Nehal
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T Rajan Evol 04 November 2015

A day's journey nicely put in haiku format, Asimji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 September 2015

Definitely sun jugs the sunrise and we fell the rays in wonderful life. Sun waits the spark to witness in minds of many. A very nice and thought provoking wise sets of haiku shared really. Very, very nice....10

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Sanjukta Nag 26 September 2015

Sunrise to sunset... the picture of a busy day in the lap of nature so colourfully portrayed with beautiful finishing touches of imagery...10

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