Haiku- Alertness Comments

I never knew the medical terms can be used to describe insects ceremony. Where do they get those medical tools? IF they only be Haiku words An amazing Haiku is composed here. My felicitations, dear Valsa. A Haiku is immortal as you can see now.

Such a vivid picture of the ants dissection. I will definitly opt for cremation as the thought of insect activity on my dead body is absolutely cringe worthy.

After falling down a fly dead the ants started biting and this has been so cutely painted by you as the dissecting of ants on the cadaver. Nice haiku.

autopsy is absolutely correct, nothing left! ! Thanks Valsa

Hard hitting write about a poor dead fly being dissected by the ever busy ants, great Haiku!

And so we will be treated in our graves, everywhere there is a cycle.

Tho the syllabic count was unconventional, the imagery was impeccable.

To observe carefully the ways of nature and write about them in few words is a remarkable ability.

A fly being dead and ants being alive and active, two entities bind together nature's way for a poet to craft a nice Haiku on. That's creative poetry. X