A nice descriptive haiku. They are one of my favs. saying so much and painting wonderful pictures with so few words. Some may thing it's easy, but to make them live you have to make the words just right. Well done
beauty is fleeting like everything else diminishes...turns to ashes! ! ! Great...
Wonderfully done, I love it, I love it. Your title so illustrates it. Don’t forget to catch some of mine. Adeline
time scribbles inevitable lines on everyones forehead....and...it becomes an art..the art of longer life..
childhood beach house the wind ripples the dune