Saturday, July 12, 2008

(haiku) Aging Comments

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Alice Cuenca
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Martin Gottlieb Cohen 31 December 2008

childhood beach house the wind ripples the dune

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Mifael Llauderes 09 November 2008

perfect meter perfect metaphor..

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 September 2008

Ammmmmmazing ! ........................10

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Tj Becker 22 September 2008

A nice descriptive haiku. They are one of my favs. saying so much and painting wonderful pictures with so few words. Some may thing it's easy, but to make them live you have to make the words just right. Well done

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Chitra - 26 July 2008

wonderful! nice theme captured

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C T Heart 24 July 2008

beauty is fleeting like everything else diminishes...turns to ashes! ! ! Great...

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Adeline Foster 21 July 2008

Wonderfully done, I love it, I love it. Your title so illustrates it. Don’t forget to catch some of mine. Adeline

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Ying Escalona 17 July 2008

time scribbles inevitable lines on everyones forehead....and...it becomes an art..the art of longer life..

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