Wednesday, June 7, 2023

Haiku … Age Comments

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A flower is life
That grows with maturity
To wither and die.
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Jayne Louise Davies
flower haiku
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Poetic Sky 08 June 2023

Really nice haiku.

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2023

Short life but full of fragrance. Good one.

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Jayne Louise Davies 08 June 2023

Thank you everyone : ) I'm so thankful for your kind comments x

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Nosheen Irfan 08 June 2023

Very aptly put. A flower is a true depiction of this life. Great metaphor!

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David Wood 07 June 2023

Flowers will live on in your poetry Jayne.

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D.N. Rebb 07 June 2023

Great haiku. Though I feel the 'to' should be a 'yet'(yet withers and dies)

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Pallab Chaudhury 07 June 2023

Nicely inked.... Congrats!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
Jayne Louise Davies
Jayne Louise Davies
Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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