Monday, March 10, 2014

Haiku- Adam And Eve Comments

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Promised Land promised
On condition not to disobey rules, We
Follow disobedience as sweet fruits.
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rajesh.c Bose 16 October 2014

wonderful...nice haiku keep writing pls

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Rajesh.c Bose 16 October 2014

wonderful imagery......

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* Sunprincess * 30 April 2014

.............adam and eve...i love that story....wonderful write..

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Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Oh yes! that evil apple! Lol.

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