Thursday, April 5, 2018

Haiku- A Thought Comments

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Valsa George
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Anjandev Roy 23 November 2019

Glorious haiku. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Mj Lemon 03 February 2019

Such a great thought, Valsa...Always look up, not down. This goes straight to myfavourites.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 May 2018

When we achieve any success after a lot of efforts, we should look around for the beauty of the positive things rather than the filthy negative ones. An excellent thought communicated in so few words, well done Valsa!

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Muhammad Ali 30 April 2018

Yes, there should be positivity in our efforts, goals and our manners when we are the reachers. beautiful haiku

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Mihaela Pirjol 17 April 2018

Wonderful juxtaposition! Wonderfully composed haiku!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 April 2018

No sooner does the thought occur to us than we act upon it........yes thought is such a lofty thing.......Valsa....... very well penned haiku.......thanks for sharing....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 April 2018

I absolutely agree with the comments of esteemed poetess G R Menon what she quotes of saint poet R N Tagore's words...Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder It's a beautiful Haiku! Great thought!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 April 2018

Perception matters a lot. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. Yes truly, Valsa, we have to climb a mountain to see the beauty around. Great Haiku with great thought. Luckily, my vote button has started functioning. Full vote for you, my dear friend. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 April 2018

In our environment there is beauty as well as the piles of garbage. A person may enjoy as per his outlook. A thought provoking haiku shared amazingly.10

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Savita Tyagi 08 April 2018

A very thoughtful Haiku.

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Loke Kok Yee 07 April 2018

We undertake an arduous journey for noble goals; else the effort be wasted. I love the many ways that one can look at this well crafted haiku. Thanks Valsa.

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Indira Renganathan 07 April 2018

Literally speaking many hill stations are piled up with garbage to look like a hill of garbage only....we go there for its beauty and not to spoil it...very well said words....thank you

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A powerful perspective of the power of right choices! Well done my friend!

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Kelly Kurt 05 April 2018

One often finds what they are looking for. Look for garbage and you will find it while ignoring beauty. Excellent! Peace

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Mj Lemon 05 April 2018

A great sentiment! Always rise above. This is sound lesson, and to be taken metaphorically as well as literally. This gem to myfavourites.

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 April 2018

Great wisdom in those lines. Climbing all the way to mountain viewing just beauty despite all hurdles.

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Rini Shibu 05 April 2018

Nice haiku, there is negatives and positive, but look for the positive, life will be more beautiful

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Hazel Durham 05 April 2018

The journey can be difficult but the destination is worth it for the unforgettable beauty of the view! Beautiful write!

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Jaya Das 05 April 2018

Beautiful haiku....and well said though it is difficult to climb the mountain....but the beauty on reaching it is ethereal

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