Haiku - A Song In The Air Comments

We hear the both lightening from sky and whisper of bees with great pleasure. We hear the song with interesting notion. A nice imagery is drawn in this excellent poem...10

A well penned pretty poem. Simply fabulous.....10++++++

whispering of bees lightning on the horizon a song in the air love this short poem

Music to my ears whispering of bees lightning on the horizon a song in the air

Great poem and nice picture. You have learned this art to write short poem effectively

Song in the air rightly said. Liked it.

whispering of bees lightning on the horizon a song in the air..... Beautifully crafted Buzzing the story In the eardrums of flowers To live on honey

Bliss! Hum the song, reach the sky.10++ for this amazing thought.