Tuesday, March 1, 2016

Haiku- A Dalliance Comments

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Valsa George
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Bri Edwards 02 October 2018

p.s. and to November's showcase it shall go, in due time. or is it do time, or dew time? do1 do͞o/ noun noun: doo 1. informal•North American short for hairdo. 2. informal•British a party or other social event. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2018

(cont.) , (again) i've visited this poem (2 yrs. ago) ! ! oh, well, i'll say more: Dalliance: noun: dalliance; plural noun: dalliances a casual romantic or sexual relationship. brief or casual involvement with something. or...Bri, I, say: a Dandy Alliance! to MyPoemList bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 02 October 2018

dandy, as a noun, can refer to a (man) : glamour boy; sharp dresser, snappy dresser; dude, pretty boy, etc. [[yes, like me, Bri]] it can also mean: an excellent thing of its kind. as an adjective it means relating to or characteristic of a dandy (see above) , OR [North American] an excellent thing of its kind. (cont.)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2017

Beautifully painted the beauty of the poem as well the beauty of the nature through a dandy butterfly. Beautiful haiku ptesented.

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Bri Edwards 11 September 2016

Valsa, you have inspired me: A Dandy A dandy butterbri Lands on a bunch of girls Kissing each in turn well, almost as good as yours. :) bri

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Valsa George 12 September 2016

Ha... ha! ! With a change of two words, you have worked a magic....... but don't land on a rose bush... You are sure to be pricked! !

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 March 2016

Peace and love! With the muse of nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 March 2016

Your haiku captures the essence of the picture beautifully and the picture paints the beauty of your poem.

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Savita Tyagi 02 March 2016

This haiku is beautiful. You excell is your haikus.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 March 2016

Brevity is thy special attribute, Valsa! Only a few brilliant poets can write like this.

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Bernard Snyder 01 March 2016

Short yet ever so sweet! . No one does it quite like you Valsa!

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