Sunday, September 21, 2008

Haiku - A Creature's Sigh Comments

Rating: 5.0

Creature's day of gloom
As if in its brink of doom
Asked: 'When can I bloom? '
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Edgar Andrade Baguio
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Aine Carroll 08 June 2010

Love this Haiku. One of my favourite styles. Also thank you for your comment on my poems The Aunts. At least somebody got it!

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Mifael Llauderes 27 October 2008

i see a desperate maiden in that metaphor..=) fine writes

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Koyel Mitra 27 September 2008

Lovely haiku with rhyming too.A 10!

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Reshma Ramesh 24 September 2008

wow! ! beautiful.....

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Edgar Andrade Baguio

Edgar Andrade Baguio

Lapu-Lapu City, Cebu
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