Haiku. A City (5-7-5) Comments

Thats not exactly haiku than it were a failed haiku

A nice haiku... Well crafted one... It's a nice experience some of the gems in your treasury....

A meaningful haiku so nicely delineated.Thanks for sharing.

littered/strewn would do it eg

whoops extra syllable L2 luv excellent poem

Scraps of human souls is a powerful line in the haiku. Thank you.

Littered with human souls! The city here is the microcosm of the entire planet that is littered with life in its infinity............

A real description of life in the cities where every one goes out on the streets, sometimes without any purpose and they litter on streets like garbage causing many problems. But who can remove this scrap from the roads? The situation in rural areas is still different, they too go out but sit below a tall and dense tree and remain engaged in different discussions right from politics to interesting scandals.

I see an indictment sort of imagery in this meaningful haiku and I somewhat tend to agree.

Goes straight to heart.

A perfect haiku with insights.........Valsa............brilliantly crafted...........

wonderful haiku.. like busy street itself.

very nice.short and sweet.