Saturday, November 3, 2018

Haiku: A Bee For Syrup Comments

Rating: 5.0

A smart honey bee
Staggering on the rim of
Syrup container!
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Pallab Chaudhury
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 November 2018

A meaningful short poem relating to life has been astutely articulated. It is based on metaphor and philosophy. Well done.

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Pallab Chaudhury 03 November 2018

Thank you for your very encouraging comments. With best wishes and regards. PC

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 03 November 2018

A nice metaphor in a short poem.

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Pallab Chaudhury 03 November 2018

Welcome, dear poet! It's nice to have a comment from you. With best wishes and regards PC

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