Haiku Comments

nice haikus enjoyed the write.

Haiku A/ screen /door/ claps /shut—/........5 bounc/ing /un/der/ a /porch/ light........7 chalk/y /moths/ yo/-yo./.................5 Crabs/ in/ notched/ hel/mets/..........5 hoist/ing/ vic/tor/y /sal/utes/..................7 wave/ white/-mo/lar/ claws/..............5. Glints/ of /glass/y /roots: /..................5 in/ rows/ on/ black/ened/ bran/ches/..........7 sil/ver/ par/snips/ drip./.................5 traditional haiku about beauty of nature & seasons myth 3 lines; 17 syllables with 5+7+5 arrangement...