Sunday, September 13, 2015

Haiku - 9 Patience Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 13 July 2020

Great observation I liked your note and poem

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Darren Jkoeryo 27 July 2016

Wow great management lesson from crane.

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2015

Patience is the key about life; with the muse of hope. Nice piece.

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T Rajan Evol 14 September 2015

I agree with Ms. Sanjukta's comments, Last line took it all to a different level. Another fine Haiku. Keep writing, Stay blessed.

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Sanjukta Nag 13 September 2015

Awesome use of symbolism. And the last line is very immpressive.10++

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