Tuesday, February 17, 2009

Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

Brutal winds whip leaves
trees appear bleak and dismal
fall will disappear
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helena dombrowski
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A ten from me! ! ! I love writing haikus.My best one is titled RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKUS.You have some mispellings: whip bleak disappear.You can always check your spellings and syllables with the on-line dictionary and correct them in the edit your poem/manage my poetry.Good image and feeling to your haiku.

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helena dombrowski

helena dombrowski

St. Petersburgh, Russia
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