Wednesday, July 6, 2016

Haiku - 82 Comments

Rating: 5.0


...
Read full text

M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Edward Kofi Louis 08 July 2016

Respecting nature with the joy of life! Nice work.

1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 July 2016

Fallen bamboo leaves sing about sunset of summer. Wonderful composition is shared here really. Wise drafting.10

1 0 Reply
T Rajan Evol 06 July 2016

Awesome haiku, Nicely executed connecting the two variants.

1 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 06 July 2016

Artfully written. Determination has reaped its reward with your haiku writing

1 0 Reply
Dev Anand 06 July 2016

powerful observation......... so natural for the bamboo to shed it leaves in high summer and together with the falling leaves... to see the sunset....... soooooo fine and exquisite. thank you dear poet.

2 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
Close
Error Success