Friday, March 31, 2017

Haiku-8 Comments

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Bharati Nayak
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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 January 2018

Loved reading this beautiful Haiku.....Green waves on fields/Smile on the farmer's face...Thanks for sharing!

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Glen Kappy 21 December 2017

Visitiing your poems I came on this one again. The three pictures in it touch off delight in me. Living in a high desert environment I definitely relate to the farmer and the promise of rain. If you haven’t read them already, you might enjoy my poems Fat Clouds, a Prayer, Rain Prayer, and one about a promise denied, Huge Dark Clouds. Hoping you’re well in all ways, Glen

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Susan Williams 12 December 2017

Loved that addition of the smile on the farmer's face- -around here a farmer might tear his hair out of his head to see rain clouds barreling toward his unharvested crop! You really have a way with Haiku 10

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 12 December 2017

Smile on the farmer's face so nice haiku10±++++++++++(+

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 December 2017

A great depiction of a farmer's ecstasy through this beautiful Haiku! I loved this precise piece of poetry! Thanks dear madam for sharing.....10

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Soumya Ranjan Rout 19 November 2017

Green waves on fields Smile on the farmer's face Great thought.Thank you for sharing this poem

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Resh Kav 04 July 2017

a rain drop is the real fuel for farmer. good haiku

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Loke Kok Yee 01 July 2017

Rain at the right time bring smiles to everyone's faces. To farmers' it's a blessing. Nice Haiku

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2017

The Green waves on the field denotes grear hope. the thundering black clouds denotes negativity. hope. we shall spread hope through our poems always. thank u dear Poetess

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Valsa George 17 April 2017

When farmers see rain clouds in the sky and hear the rumblings of thunder, their faces brighten up anticipating a season of rain when Earth will be clad in green! Beautiful Haiku!

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M Asim Nehal 15 April 2017

Fantastic speaking haiku, Loved it,10+++

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Muhammad Ali 12 April 2017

nice lines, I have been seeing this black cloud from years, it thunders when wheat is to be harvested.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 03 April 2017

Read your Haikus 6 to 8. Beautiful thoughts and images. I have written only a very few Haikus and am not quite sure how important is the insistence on syllable count (5-7-5) , which you don't seem to have followed.

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Spock The Vegan 31 March 2017

Thank you for the images created by your Haikus.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2017

Beautiful haiku on rainy season shared. Farmers smile having looking green waves. Thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 March 2017

Smile on the farmer's face! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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