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Visitiing your poems I came on this one again. The three pictures in it touch off delight in me. Living in a high desert environment I definitely relate to the farmer and the promise of rain. If you haven’t read them already, you might enjoy my poems Fat Clouds, a Prayer, Rain Prayer, and one about a promise denied, Huge Dark Clouds. Hoping you’re well in all ways, Glen
Loved that addition of the smile on the farmer's face- -around here a farmer might tear his hair out of his head to see rain clouds barreling toward his unharvested crop! You really have a way with Haiku 10
Smile on the farmer's face so nice haiku10±++++++++++(+
A great depiction of a farmer's ecstasy through this beautiful Haiku! I loved this precise piece of poetry! Thanks dear madam for sharing.....10
Green waves on fields Smile on the farmer's face Great thought.Thank you for sharing this poem
Rain at the right time bring smiles to everyone's faces. To farmers' it's a blessing. Nice Haiku
The Green waves on the field denotes grear hope. the thundering black clouds denotes negativity. hope. we shall spread hope through our poems always. thank u dear Poetess
When farmers see rain clouds in the sky and hear the rumblings of thunder, their faces brighten up anticipating a season of rain when Earth will be clad in green! Beautiful Haiku!
nice lines, I have been seeing this black cloud from years, it thunders when wheat is to be harvested.
Read your Haikus 6 to 8. Beautiful thoughts and images. I have written only a very few Haikus and am not quite sure how important is the insistence on syllable count (5-7-5) , which you don't seem to have followed.
Beautiful haiku on rainy season shared. Farmers smile having looking green waves. Thanks.
Smile on the farmer's face! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Loved reading this beautiful Haiku.....Green waves on fields/Smile on the farmer's face...Thanks for sharing!