Thursday, July 12, 2007

Haiku #72 At The End Of Day Comments

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Clouds blanket the sky
Silhouettes and shadows loom
Day embraces night
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Rufus Purdie 12 July 2007

I saw no need for your poem to be rewritten!

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THE FIRST SHRIKE 12 July 2007

Clouds blanket the sky Silhouettes and shadows loom Day embraces night The sky when blanked night embraces trees shadows leaves silouetted then gently breeze our eyes may so rest

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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