Haiku 7 Comments

clever and ironic..there is something special with haikus...forces the thoughts to moove in a different direction i think..

meaningful haiku very ironic sourness of of life on different walks of life.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

Less words embeded with deep meaning

a great irony in this haiku sir.....very well thought out...10

Nicely captured

The golden half heart of nature...lovely haiku written nice to have a mango juice!

Nice one, especially how you use the last line.

good 1...a perfect haiku while drinking my mango shake :)

Revelation of a true life....sweet

Very apt haiku for today...10