Haiku 53 -Pride At Top Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 53 -Pride At Top

Rating: 5.0


Earth struggling in thirst
Clouds above don't stop and rain
Pride at top is fun

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To those who are in the top the sufferings at lower level is a fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 October 2020

Profound, and they shower where they are not required.5***

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Yes dear Asim., the despise of so called big people towards the simple needs of ordinary people is so arrogantly looked down upon

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 October 2020

An astute observation on people's character. A great metaphoriical write in just three lines. Nice imagery.

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Thank you very much for the comments dear RMJ. I have seen and perceived the despise big people feel against the sincere effoets of ordinary people even for meeting their both ends

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 October 2020

A Haiku that sets you thinking... on pride, right after I read one of Poet Costas Lagos....

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Thank you very much dear Pathakji. Top level pride with despise for those down is really abominable uncivic and unruly

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Kostas Lagos 18 October 2020

A haiku that needs to be read more than once. Really good!

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Thank you very much dear poet

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Thank you very much dear poet for the comments

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