Friday, October 2, 2020

Haiku 52 - Shyness Adds Beauty Comments

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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Anjandev Roy 03 October 2022

Lovely piece......thanks for sharing....

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Thanks a lot Anjandev

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Rajnish Manga 05 October 2020

Absolutely fantastic. The personification of moon adds grace to the entire scenario. Thanks for sharing this lovely snap-shot in action.

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Thank you very much Rajnishji. The gradual exposure of the moon has captured my aesthetics and expressed in terms of the slow unveiling process of beautiful village girls

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Anil Kumar Panda 04 October 2020

A sweet one indeed. Loved it. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much dear AKP for the comments

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 October 2020

A well created poem. Truly amazing...5 stars*****

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Thank you very much dear Bernard. Moon the beauty takes a long time of 28 days to lift her veil. She is very slow due to shyness

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Anjandev Roy 02 October 2020

......slowly in four weeks.......fine..........anjandev roy.

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Thank you Anjandev. Yes, the princess lifts her veil little by little and completes in 28 days

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Kostas Lagos 02 October 2020

Excellent haiku! " Princess moon is shy" ...wow!

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The moon sometimes disturbs my thoughts having turned to a bride who strains amidst shyness to lift her veil. Its a long process and little by little she accomplishes it in four weeks

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Thank you very much dear Kostas Lagos, the moon has aiways been a beauty who disrupts our sleep!

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M Asim Nehal 02 October 2020

Yes, it adds to beauty, Nice one 10*****

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Thank you very much dear Asim for the comments

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