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before it recedes
a tide brings you the present
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Inspired...the first is pure Orcadian, I think. The last; proverbial wisdom. And in-between...beauty in simplicity. Love the image of the earth-bound seeds caught in the web before their flight had really begun...
Those first two verses are fantastic haiku. The second one is an absolute stunner of a haiku. You enable me to be there as if it's happening right now. Magical! Alan
Beautiful and real haikus. It took me twenty five years back when I used to write haikus too. A definite 10 for these wonderful haikus. Regards Naseer
Eloquent, deep, meaningful and beautiful. And too short like a human life.10.
wonderful haikus...i liked the second one..have seen that scene so many times...lovely.10