sun light filters through
city's high rise building-gloom
a tear in despair!5 7 5
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I read Haiku 3,4,5. You fulfill the form with substantive comment, these are resonant poems - and that resonance is what the haiku aims for. You hit the target everytime.
In trying to filter through, the sunlight seems to cut through the buildings. Beautiful presentation.
Beautiful flight of imagery that compares filtered sun rise in a high rise with a tear in despair. Thanks for sharing.