Haiku- 44
(Passion)
Night falls with thunder,
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Night falls with thunder, Storm swells within mind restless, Devil peeps with sweet paint
With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
The poem seems to interpret action taking place in a man's subconscious and unconscious mind under the tumult of desires.
Night, storm, devils peep.. restlessness. in very few words you convey a great moral philosophy . thank u dear poet. tony
a small poem with such a grt depth.one of my favourite haikus..very nicely written by Prabir Gayen
A very brilliant natural haiku is beautifully penned. An interesting sharing is done here.10
Thanks your comment is always beautiful. You have deep sense of poetry. You are a poet of deep poetic sensibility.
A wonderful and well crafted haiku that depicts the darkness of life. Thought provoking.
Very well and deep comment...''Darkness of life ..yes it is..thanks Rose Marie Juan-austin
Night falls with thunder, Storm swells within mind restless, Devil peeps with sweet paint.