Monday, December 17, 2018

Haiku 44 Comments

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Haiku- 44
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Night falls with thunder,
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Prabir Gayen
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Meethi Mondal 03 June 2020

Night falls with thunder, Storm swells within mind restless, Devil peeps with sweet paint.

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Prabir Gayen 26 May 2020

Night falls with thunder, Storm swells within mind restless, Devil peeps with sweet paint

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2018

With the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 21 December 2018

The poem seems to interpret action taking place in a man's subconscious and unconscious mind under the tumult of desires.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 December 2018

Night, storm, devils peep.. restlessness. in very few words you convey a great moral philosophy . thank u dear poet. tony

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Jean Kroeber 18 December 2018

a small poem with such a grt depth.one of my favourite haikus..very nicely written by Prabir Gayen

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 December 2018

u appear to be an expert haikuis keep atI t Prabir

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Julian 18 December 2018

Wow...very good haiku...👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Kostas Lagos 18 December 2018

That's what I call high quality haiku

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 December 2018

A very brilliant natural haiku is beautifully penned. An interesting sharing is done here.10

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Prabir Gayen 17 December 2018

Thanks your comment is always beautiful. You have deep sense of poetry. You are a poet of deep poetic sensibility.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 December 2018

Prabir, a marvelous haiku👍👍

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Prabir Gayen 17 December 2018

Thanks Bernard...F ji

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 December 2018

A wonderful and well crafted haiku that depicts the darkness of life. Thought provoking.

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Prabir Gayen 17 December 2018

Very well and deep comment...''Darkness of life ..yes it is..thanks Rose Marie Juan-austin

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